Dear Leona,
Thanks for your service. I think this translated version is just good. Most professional words and phrases are expressed effectively in english. But there's only a few misunderstandings. And I am worried that the second paragraph exists too long to catch the reader's attention. But it's not about your work, I'll discuss it with Alana. Thank you very much.
Some words are too extravagant and some sentences are somehow complex. I do know that it may be in an appropriate tone, but it reads not that real, a little childish and not like from a professor's perspective. Maybe my original document is not very good in this way, but I do think advisors from MyDocument should supply help by free translation instead of literal translation. Anyway, thanks for your service. —Xinyi
Again, thanks for your excellent service and prompt feedbacks as always. I will make some minor revision according to your second round of advice. And I will ask for your help if necessary within 7 days. It is considerably great to communicate and work together with you. I will never hasitate to recommend your servise to my friends.
Hello Dear Clary, thank you for your service. I think you really did a very good job in revising several parts in this essay. Only the last sentence has some flaws. Because what I want to express is that I did those work as an undergraduate, instead of going to do them in future study. However, thanks for your service, which is very helpful. I can submit my SOP right today!
Xinyi
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效率高，修改到了关键的点，让我的文书丰满、地道了很多
效率高，但翻译上似乎没有特别为顾客考虑到的地方
效率高，修改了很多值得注意的细节，大大简化了文章
效率很高，帮助很大！
Dear Leona,
Thanks for your service. I think this translated version is just good. Most professional words and phrases are expressed effectively in english. But there's only a few misunderstandings. And I am worried that the second paragraph exists too long to catch the reader's attention. But it's not about your work, I'll discuss it with Alana. Thank you very much.
Xinyi
这次服务质量一般，主要是翻译得不太好，顾问采用了直译的方法，译出来的文章比较浮夸，一点点经历被赞上了天。原稿读起来应该没有这么浮夸的，我觉得翻译工作者和润色工作者都应该站在申请者的立场考虑，不仅要考虑辞藻和表达的问题，也要尽量把推荐信改的真实一些。
Some words are too extravagant and some sentences are somehow complex. I do know that it may be in an appropriate tone, but it reads not that real, a little childish and not like from a professor's perspective. Maybe my original document is not very good in this way, but I do think advisors from MyDocument should supply help by free translation instead of literal translation. Anyway, thanks for your service. —Xinyi
顾问的英文写作水平了得，让我学到了很多，感谢MyDocument
Thanks a lot for your great service. I will never hesitate to recommend it to my friends.
翻译忠实原稿，语句通畅；主页菌的反馈很及时，顾问们也都赞赞哒！
翻译忠实原稿，语句通畅
非常满意的一次服务。顾问提出了很多细致而中肯的建议，给了我很大帮助，感谢MyDocument!
Dear Alana,
Again, thanks for your excellent service and prompt feedbacks as always. I will make some minor revision according to your second round of advice. And I will ask for your help if necessary within 7 days. It is considerably great to communicate and work together with you. I will never hasitate to recommend your servise to my friends.
Yours,
Xinyi
这次服务不太满意，评价晚了，但质量确实一般
非常抱歉我们的服务给您带来了不便，我会在24小时内和您联系向您了解具体情况。
Best,
Sue
MyDocumate Product Team
I think this advisor was somehow mean to spend evergy and time in the task.
非常抱歉我们的服务给您带来了不便，我会在24小时内和您联系向您了解具体情况。
Best,
Sue
MyDocumate Product Team
还可以
Very clear expression and useful revisement
不错
Thanks for you service. I admire your enthusiasm and style as always.
反馈及时，质量高
Dear Richard,
Many thanks for your help. You did a very good job and gave me valuable advice.
Wish you happy holiday!
Xinyi
建议客服以真心理解客户为友好服务的表现，而不是语言上的故作客气
Hi Xinyi, 我们的主页妞都会尽职责和权限所能满足用户的需求呢，您有这样的体验一定是事出有因的，所以可以请您告诉我们具体的原因吗，我们会进行核查，并且尽快给您相关的答复。
Hello Dear Clary, thank you for your service. I think you really did a very good job in revising several parts in this essay. Only the last sentence has some flaws. Because what I want to express is that I did those work as an undergraduate, instead of going to do them in future study. However, thanks for your service, which is very helpful. I can submit my SOP right today!
Xinyi