My SOP seems much more fluent after her revision, not only in language uses but also in the logical transitions. Also, her revision made me look like a more confident and professional applicant, which might be very important for students who desire to be admitted by a decent, research-oriented graduate program in North America.
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效率和质量都超出我的预期，会继续使用，也会向别人推荐，继续加油哦~
My SOP seems much more fluent after her revision, not only in language uses but also in the logical transitions. Also, her revision made me look like a more confident and professional applicant, which might be very important for students who desire to be admitted by a decent, research-oriented graduate program in North America.