Instead of just polishing my words and sentences, the editor has provided me with many suggestions on the content to help me answer the essay question more directly. It's hard to introduce a complex thesis in the essay, and in the original document I was just describe all the details. However, with the editor's guidance, I re-wrote most part of my essay and it turned out to be stronger and more persuasive. Besides, because it was only one day before the deadline when I submitted my second draft, I was really worried about the time, but thankfully, the editor finished his second work in only about half of a day, and i successfully submit my application before the deadline. I am really grateful to my editor for his work and kind help!
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修改后文书流畅程度和段落结构都有了很大的改善，觉得1000多花的还是很值的尤其是第一次修改后，真的感觉进步了很多很多。修改也很快，比约定的时间提前了一两天。提出的建议也很专业。
修改很快，词句也很专业，还给我提了很多建议来完善文书，好评~
这次时间有点长。。。主要是中间有review环节。。。之前一次改ps没碰到review 。。。不过修改的很好~也赶在ddl前交了~
Instead of just polishing my words and sentences, the editor has provided me with many suggestions on the content to help me answer the essay question more directly. It's hard to introduce a complex thesis in the essay, and in the original document I was just describe all the details. However, with the editor's guidance, I re-wrote most part of my essay and it turned out to be stronger and more persuasive. Besides, because it was only one day before the deadline when I submitted my second draft, I was really worried about the time, but thankfully, the editor finished his second work in only about half of a day, and i successfully submit my application before the deadline. I am really grateful to my editor for his work and kind help!