Thank you and thank you for working during New Year Holiday. I received my final essay. I saw the exactly the same sentence repeated in the same paragraph and two to three grammatical mistakes that are quite apparent. To me the essay is not very flowing and the connections between paragraphs are not very strong. I do appreciate your help for the rest of the improvements.
Thank you, I know it's in a rush but I still get my document ahead of time. Thank you for working in New Year Holiday.
Thank you and thank you for working during New Year Holiday. I received my final essay. I saw the exactly the same sentence repeated in the same paragraph and two to three grammatical mistakes that are quite apparent. To me the essay is not very flowing and the connections between paragraphs are not very strong. I do appreciate your help for the rest of the improvements.