Language and grammar become more coherent. However, as you said, the first paragraph still need more strategic revision in order to make it more stunning. Look forward to works with you.
I am very pleased with my essay regarding the structure and the language. My editor is easy-to-approach and has done his part, making my PS a strong application material. Thank you. I am sure I will recommend he to my sister and friends in the future.
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language more coherent.
Language and grammar become more coherent. However, as you said, the first paragraph still need more strategic revision in order to make it more stunning. Look forward to works with you.
nice editing and make the first paragraph more concise.
thanks for the editing, i will appoint you as an editor if i have more short essay to edit.
editor 很 friendly 也很及时跟我联系 最后改的结果我也非常满意
I am very pleased with my essay regarding the structure and the language. My editor is easy-to-approach and has done his part, making my PS a strong application material. Thank you. I am sure I will recommend he to my sister and friends in the future.