Thanks for your help and suggestion in this process. I have deleted the part that you highlighted in green to make the number of words meet the limit. I like my essay revised by you. I think it meets my requirement and hope it can also help me with my application.
Thanks for your help and suggestion in this process. I have deleted the part that you highlighted in green to make the number of words meet the limit. I like my essay revised by you. I think it meets my requirement and hope it can also help me with my application.
Dear Kristen,
Thanks a lot for your serious rivision and suggestion in this process. I really appreciate your help.
Jodie