Thanks again for your generous help in my PS. After polished my PS appears more detailed and accurate. I think you have performed excellently in the reconstruction of the order of my PS and I really appreciate it. Since i am also applying for financial program, i hope that if possible you can also help modify my other PS :)
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修改的挺好的，因为逻辑观念不是很强所以顾问着重修改了行文的逻辑，顾问很热情很有耐心，不错不错~
Thanks again for your generous help in my PS. After polished my PS appears more detailed and accurate. I think you have performed excellently in the reconstruction of the order of my PS and I really appreciate it. Since i am also applying for financial program, i hope that if possible you can also help modify my other PS :)
Thank you very much for your kind review 邵晨曦! - glad to be of assistance!