Thanks for your good grammar and language modification. However, I think the order of different parts in my PS that you change is not very appropriate. For instance, you change the part "I endeavored to use economic theories to analyze practical problems, and weave an economic net of knowledge incorporating different economic areas and apply them accordingly" after "Before I entered college, I was curious as to why certain economic events occurred". However, I have tried to do those two things in university which I mentioned in the feedback document and before I entered university , I cannot do those because I did not have enough economic knowledge. I think you could improve content's modification.
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文书的语言润色非常不错，但是感觉改的不是很深入。希望继续加油吧。
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Dear Fiona,
Thanks for your good grammar and language modification. However, I think the order of different parts in my PS that you change is not very appropriate. For instance, you change the part "I endeavored to use economic theories to analyze practical problems, and weave an economic net of knowledge incorporating different economic areas and apply them accordingly" after "Before I entered college, I was curious as to why certain economic events occurred". However, I have tried to do those two things in university which I mentioned in the feedback document and before I entered university , I cannot do those because I did not have enough economic knowledge. I think you could improve content's modification.
Regards,
Yichen