修改的非常细致仔细，我提出的几点比如用英式英语都注意到了，也给出了很多自然的表达的修改意见。
Thank you very much for your careful work and I am really gratuful that you gave me a lot of helpful suggestions, especially on the native expressions. Thank you and merry Chirstmas!
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修改的非常细致仔细，我提出的几点比如用英式英语都注意到了，也给出了很多自然的表达的修改意见。
Thank you very much for your careful work and I am really gratuful that you gave me a lot of helpful suggestions, especially on the native expressions. Thank you and merry Chirstmas!