Word choosing seems lack variation. And after polished, the essay is too objective to be sincere. I'm somewhat disappointed and I even have to edit the essay by myself after the service finished.
Jeffrey is very responsible and meticulous, and he helped me handle every detail. He not only edited the CV, but also guided me to improve it by myself. Great!!!
Jeffrey and I made lots of efforts to accomplish the PS, and the final version is so wonderful that it is beyond my level. My PS final version is totally different from the model essay but quite concise and persuasive. Jeffrey is very earnest and professional. His usage of words is very accurate and advanced. I learned a lot from him when cooperating with him.
很好,之前攒下的问题都得到了解答
学姐很健谈,介绍的情况也很详细。更重要的是学姐掌握了好多一手资料,特别有启发。中途skype不给力,学姐很果断地就同意转战QQ了哈哈。
很好,加急了的满以为要48小时,没想到24小时就OK了,效率超级高!!
Adivisor is really nice, patient to answer my questions, and high efficiency! awesome!! Thank you soooo much.
It's OK. The polishing service is timely. But it didn't reach my expectation.
Word choosing seems lack variation. And after polished, the essay is too objective to be sincere. I'm somewhat disappointed and I even have to edit the essay by myself after the service finished.
great!
Jeffrey is very patient and nice, very easy to communicate. He gave me lots of useful advices. Thank you so much!
great! time saving!
Jeffrey is very responsible and meticulous, and he helped me handle every detail. He not only edited the CV, but also guided me to improve it by myself. Great!!!
excellent!!!
Jeffrey and I made lots of efforts to accomplish the PS, and the final version is so wonderful that it is beyond my level. My PS final version is totally different from the model essay but quite concise and persuasive. Jeffrey is very earnest and professional. His usage of words is very accurate and advanced. I learned a lot from him when cooperating with him.
good job!!!
My essay is about academic experience. The tutor's usage of word is very accurate and professional. I love it! Thank you
改的结果不是很满意。tutor仅仅是把我提供给他的信息放在一起,并没有太大的整合和提升,有点失望
怎么说,Johnny也不能说没做事。但是这次VIP改出来的让我挺不满意的,至少比起我之前碰到的VIP顾问Jeffery有差距。第一,可能是思维和方法的问题,Johnny并没有帮助我找到我背景资料中的线索,然后引导我去写,仅仅是把我给他的背景资料放在一起,所以整篇文章逻辑性不强。第二,用词和句式也不是很考究,最简单的一个,like的用法,GMAT里是明确提出like不能用于举例,但是Johnny用了很多,也不是说不对,只是,这种细节也应该注意吧。对文书修改结果不满意,但是这种情况又没办法投诉,因为人家顾问也确实交出来一份修改后的essay啊,也不能说什么,所以只能自己回去再修改,这种体验太糟糕了。我个人是觉得Johnny没有花太多心思在这个case上
很好
很好
同样是Johnny负责的,这篇essay就好很多,很不错,整篇文章非常organized,也许是题目比较有趣,所以顾问投入更多吧。
同样是Johnny负责的,这篇essay就好很多,很不错,整篇文章非常organized,也许是题目比较有趣,所以顾问投入更多吧。
这篇SOP在3篇文章里面必须是最不满意的!文章各种没有逻辑,段与段之间各种不连贯。更重要的是,我自己看着这篇我都觉得这个applicant不怎么样,更何况是AO看呢。这篇essay连我自己都不能说服,何况说服AO
这篇SOP的问题更多,必须再说一次,这次VIP改出来的让我挺不满意的,至少比起我之前碰到的VIP顾问Jeffery有差距。第一,这篇essay不同段落对于short-term goal的表述都是自相矛盾的,虽然我承认我在与顾问沟通的过程中改变了我的职业规划想法,但是这不是很正常的吗?写essay就是不断修正不断审视自己啊。似乎顾问并没有很好的理解我的想法,然后把之前和之后的职业规划混在一起了, 然后就出现了这篇悲剧的SOP;第二,最后成文每段的内容和之前大纲的para topic/purpose不匹配,也丧失了大纲里面的逻辑性;第三,这篇SOP和一起修改的其他两篇不统一,比如对于long-term goal&short-term goal的表述相差很大。 第四,用词和句式不考究,可能是我遇到的第一个VIP顾问太优秀了?上次改的就觉得各种惊喜,觉得名校毕业生就该是那个水准,可我看着这次改出来的,就觉得这种水平我也可以写出来,说真的,不夸张,落差这么大让我各种接受不了。反正,看着最后完稿的文章,我很失望,然后被迫自己重新写了一篇。真是失败啊。
总结一下,这次让Johnny修改的三篇文章,水平参差不齐,6215 Career Essay不是很好,但是改改还可以用,6223 character essay很好,很棒,文章非常吸引人,非常能体现我的特质,很感谢! 6225 SOP 简直悲剧,我几乎是重写然后准备拿到这儿来找另一个顾问改。
很抱歉说了这么多负面的东西,但是我也算是老顾客了,前前后后购买也超过十次了吧,就是信任Mydocumate的品牌和顾问的水平才重复购买,Mydocumate几乎伴随了我整个申请季。这次这种情况着实低于我对Mydocumate的期望,觉得不吐不快啊,请见谅。
很棒!tutor很负责任,沟通良好
超赞!!!果然还是会说中文的好,沟通各种顺畅,加上Ryan对essay的层次布局有把握,用词句式很专业地道,最后的文章非常流畅,很棒!
还行。tutor理解错原essay中几个句子的意思,然后改错了,我告诉ta弄错了问怎么改,就说不能再改了,怪我咯?真是呵呵
还行。tutor理解错原essay中几个句子的意思,然后改错了,我告诉ta弄错了问怎么改,就说不能再改了,怪我咯?真是呵呵
回复很及时,态度算不上热情,礼貌而已。