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Diane gives helpful suggestions on the content and vocabulary choice of the essay. Also, she responds and gives feedback quickly. I really appreciate Diane's help!

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Sean avatar Sean
给顾问 Jaclyn Leeds 的评价：

Thank you for your help. Some question was not answered though, an overall comment and further suggestion would be appreciated.

  • Sean 回复 Sean

    Hi Jaclyn,

    Thank you for replying on holiday! I appreciate your time!

    Yes you are right I guess I should put my questions here rather than putting them in the feet back comment or description... So let me rephrase my questions:

    1. Do you think it is better to put two paragraph that describe my current job together at the top? I think it might be stronger, the paragraph in the middle of the passage described my motivation and achievement better. I put that paragraph in the middle so that it could show a time sequence, but I'm afraid that it's in a part that could hardly be read.

    2. Do you think it is OK that I refrain from talking about my last attempt of  application in 2014 fall? It remained a 7-months gap on my CV... and I also didn't talk about one of my short employment where I worked in website department in a headhunt company as it only last 4-5 months. Is it OK for me not to talk about these things?

    3. Could you give me an overall comment on this essay? Or maybe, from 1 - 10 how much would you rate it? If you think it's not good, what part could I improve to make it better? 

    These are actually the questions I really wish to have an answer at the beginning. Instead of asking them out I put them in the comments... Now I think it's my bad, I should have asked here. Sorry, I'm pretty new to this platform and this is the first time I've ever purchase this kind of service. But I think your work is great and the essay now looks a lot better.

    Sincerely,

    Sean 

  • Jaclyn Leeds 回复 Sean

    Hi Sean,

    I'm not sure which questions are unanswered. I haven't received any messages from you since I sent the second iteration. I'd be happy to answer a question if you let me know what you'd like my suggestion on.

    All my best,

    Jaclyn

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Vicky avatar Vicky
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Thank you for your suggestions, which are of great help!

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Great!

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very good teacher!

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This is the first time I work with Dawn, and I will definitely recommend her to anyone who needs help!

Dawn is really kind, friendly and patient, maybe the kindest mentor I've ever met. She provided me many constructive, professional suggestions and also helped me to rephrase many of my sentences. Dawn also made detailed, thoughtful comments in the margin in every draft, and I felt that she really cared about my application and wanted to help me. With her help, my statement of purpose got significantly improved.

It was such an enjoyable experience and I can hardly express my gratitude. Thank you Dawn! I wish you a Merry Christmas!

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Happy Holiday！

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lynne avatar lynne
给顾问 Dawn Hollis 的评价：

The editing by Dawn is very good, making my essay more concise, natural and to the point.

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Vicky avatar Vicky
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The vocabulary and phrases in my essay are impressively enhanced after the revision. I really appreciate your suggestions on my essay and I would definitely recommend you to all the people around me!

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George's edits highly exceed my expectations! !！　Now I can say that I really enjoy reading my SOP, the style and flow are perfect. Strongly recommended!!!

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Emily is a meticulous and professional editor. She raised many insightful questions in every draft, which helped me a lot to formulate my thoughts in a more professional and persuasive manner. She also knows what you want to convey - if not, she will ask you and make sure that she captures it - and can rephrase your sentences to make them much more coherent. I am very satisfied with the final draft. Thank you!

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  • Henry L 回复 Tenny Ho

    Thank you very much for your kind review Tenny! Very best of luck with your applications!

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