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简介

I am glad that you have decided to invest in your education. I am well-placed to support you in your journey, as you successfully obtain an admission at the university of your choice. Studying at top-ranked universities such as University of Cambridge and University of Chicago as an international student has taught me what admissions offices typically look for in successful applicants, and how best to communicate your achievements. My job experience at Oxera (economic consulting for litigation and arbitration disputes), Deloitte and Morgan Stanley built on this and developed my ability to compose facts into a compelling ‘story’ that keeps a reader interested and convinced. Besides this, my girlfriend was a Chinese international student at LSE and my interactions with her, and her friends, have given me a unique perspective on the issues commonly faced by Chinese students in trying to communicate their achievements to western audiences. I am, therefore, personally motivated to help international students to better overcome the barrier we face in presenting ourselves in the best light. 投资海外教育并不便宜，但绝对物有所值。也许你对这充满变数的未来还有些迷茫，没关系，让我来帮助你开启这段精彩的旅程，并以得到你梦想学校的录取为终点。在剑桥大学和芝加哥大学的经历是我人生中的宝贵财富，它们也帮我了解到这些顶级学校在寻找什么样的学生，我将和你一起，用你的经历和成就书写一张通往理想大学的入场券。我曾在英国本土公司Oxera以及跨国公司德勤和摩根斯坦利工作过，日常工作中我经常需要“讲故事”，即用事实和数据构建出引人入胜又极具说服力的文章，让读者清晰地领会我想表达的意图。我也将会用这方面的经验和智识为你打造出专属你的精彩文书。此外，鉴于我有一个曾在伦敦政治经济学院读书的中国女朋友，我十分习惯与中国背景的留学生一起工作。在和我的女朋友以及她周围人的接触过程中，我深刻又直观地认识到了很多中国学生在和西方群体交流时的常见问题，因而，我十分希望能够帮助中国留学生克服这些表达和思考模式障碍，向申请学校表现出一个真正的、优秀的自己。

自我介绍

I have a four-part goal. First, work with you in understanding your skills and achievements. Second, support you in crafting those attributes in a form and 'story' that would convince an admissions office. Third, help you put together that story in your essays and documents in logical and nicer language. And finally, support your journey with my own experience. In doing so, I would draw on both my academic and professional experiences.

On the academic side, I bring my experience of achieving a double first class BA (Hons) degree in Economics from the University of Cambridge, and an MBA from the University of Chicago Booth School of Business. This gives me insight into the minds of admissions teams in UK and US universities.

On the professional side, I bring my most recent experience as a consultant in London, specialising in litigation and arbitration disputes. A key part of this job was to draft witnesses' testimony in a way that highlighted important facts and influenced the judge to make favourable decisions. I also bring my experience as a strategy consultant at Deloitte and investment banker at Morgan Stanley.

This combination of experiences, my personal motivation to help international students succeed, your skills and achievements, and your hard work, I believe, will create a strong team that maximises the chances of you getting admitted into the university of your choice.

我在芝士圈是想用我的学术和职业经历和你共同打造出优秀的文书，在这一过程中，我为自己设立了四个目标。首先，我要真正地发掘、了解你的成就和亮点；其次，将它们整理成一个将会打动招生官的故事；再次，我可以用逻辑化的结构和地道的英语将这个故事扩展成一篇精彩的文章；最后，以我的经验帮你在文书中呈现一个独一无二的形象，助你起航。

从学术角度来说，我本科在剑桥大学攻读经济学专业，并取得了双重一等学位（在剑桥大学大概有5%的本科学生获得这一学位），在工作4年后，我目前在芝加哥大学的布斯商学院读MBA。这些经历让我能以英美著名高校的眼光审视并修改你的文章，使之达到他们的水准。我在读书过程中的很多成就都归功于我的写作能力，它帮助我申请到了高额奖学金，也帮助我的毕业论文获得了前3%的高分，相信我的写作能力也一定会助力你的留学申请。同时，我在英国和美国长期生活，深刻地理解这两个国家的文化和语言差异，所以我可以根据你的目标院校相应调整文章的结构和用词，完成一篇地道的文书。

从职业角度来说，我在就读MBA前曾在伦敦的经济咨询业工作，主要是为诉讼和仲裁案件提供经济咨询。我日常工作中很重要的一部分就是起草专家证词，着重凸显重要的事实，并能够影响到法官，使之作出有利于我方的决定。而这与我们要突出你的优势从而打动招生官的目标不谋而合。此外，我之前在德勤的战略咨询和摩根斯坦利的投行部门从业，这些经验能让我以业内人的角度向你提供相关信息和建议。

我已准备好帮你开启这段留学旅程，快来加入我的队伍，让我们在文书中最大化地展现你的技能、经历、成就和聪明努力，让招生官眼前一亮，最终让你获得心仪学校的录取。