Arden B

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文书顾问简要 简介

The most successful application to anything, whether it's to a job, an organization or or a school, tells a great story. As an applicant, one's goal is to eloquently communicate the message that he or she would add value to the program to which they're applying. A great application will make not just an argument, but create a narrative that explains what makes one special. 不管是申请是工作、组织还是学校，优秀的申请材料都能讲述动人的故事。 作为申请者，我们的目标是应该是雄辩地传达信息，即传达出这样的信息：我能为我正在申请的项目增加价值。 一份优秀的申请材料，不仅仅有理有据，还能体现出申请者有多么与众不同。
The most successful application to anything, whether it's to a job, an organization or or a school, tells a great story. As an applicant, one's goal is to eloquently communicate the message that he or she would add value to the program to which they're applying. A great application will make not just an argument, but create a narrative that explains what makes one special. 不管是申请是工作、组织还是学校，优秀的申请材料都能讲述动人的故事。 作为申请者，我们的目标是应该是雄辩地传达信息，即传达出这样的信息：我能为我正在申请的项目增加价值。 一份优秀的申请材料，不仅仅有理有据，还能体现出申请者有多么与众不同。

顾问自我介绍 自我介绍

As an English major at a top 10 U.S. University, I learned to clearly and effectively express myself in ways that are not just well thought out, but are also interesting to the reader.  I've since applied these learnings in written communications and in my professional career.  These skills helped me tremendously as an executive recruiter for Fortune 500 companies, where I communicated regularly with leaders up to the C-Level, and developed top-tier interviewing skills.  I honed them even further as a M.B.A., where business storytelling is essential.  Now, I'm ready to share my learnings with prospective students at top U.S. Universities to help them craft articulate, well thought out and special personal narratives that will help them achieve their academic and professional aspirations.  

在美国排名前 10 大学的主修英语专业，我学会了清晰有效地表达自己。优秀的表达方式需要细细推敲，读者读起来也会很有趣。 此后，我将这些这些表达方式应用于书面交流和我的职业生涯中。 作为财富 500 强公司的高管招聘人员，优秀的表达技巧帮助我良多。在这一职业期间，我定期与最高 C 级的领导沟通，并学到了不少面试技巧。 读MBA 后，我进一步磨练我的写作和面试技能，作为MBA学生，讲故事是基本技能。 现在，我想与美国顶尖大学的申请者分享我的经验，帮助申请者完成逻辑清晰、仔细打磨和个性鲜明的个人叙述，从而帮助他们实现学习及就业目标。

As an English major at a top 10 U.S. University, I learned to clearly and effectively express myself in ways that are not just well thought out, but are also interesting to the reader.  I've since applied these learnings in written communications and in my professional career.  These skills helped me tremendously as an executive recruiter for Fortune 500 companies, where I communicated regularly with leaders up to the C-Level, and developed top-tier interviewing skills.  I honed them even further as a M.B.A., where business storytelling is essential.  Now, I'm ready to share my learnings with prospective students at top U.S. Universities to help them craft articulate, well thought out and special personal narratives that will help them achieve their academic and professional aspirations.  

在美国排名前 10 大学的主修英语专业，我学会了清晰有效地表达自己。优秀的表达方式需要细细推敲，读者读起来也会很有趣。 此后，我将这些这些表达方式应用于书面交流和我的职业生涯中。 作为财富 500 强公司的高管招聘人员，优秀的表达技巧帮助我良多。在这一职业期间，我定期与最高 C 级的领导沟通，并学到了不少面试技巧。 读MBA 后，我进一步磨练我的写作和面试技能，作为MBA学生，讲故事是基本技能。 现在，我想与美国顶尖大学的申请者分享我的经验，帮助申请者完成逻辑清晰、仔细打磨和个性鲜明的个人叙述，从而帮助他们实现学习及就业目标。

教育经历

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UCLA Anderson School of Management

MBA Business Administration
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Dartmouth College

Bachelor English
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  • Liya
    Liya Mar 15, 2019
    英文简历服务 深度修改 商业分析

    Appreciate Arden's patience and responsibility. Highly recommended!

  • Wanya Dong
    Wanya Dong Dec 26, 2018
    硕士文书服务 Recommendation Letter 深度修改 创业学

    clear thinking

  • Hank
    Hank Dec 14, 2018
    硕士文书服务 Statement of Purpose 深度修改 商业分析

    Thanks for your revision and professional advice.I think my SOP has been significantly improved after 2 round revisions.

    Best regards,
    Hank

  • Yao
    Yao Dec 10, 2018
    硕士文书服务 Statement of Purpose 深度修改 金融学

    He gave me advice about the structure of the essay, which was very useful. He is a very nice person.

  • Jiaqi
    Jiaqi Dec 7, 2018
    硕士文书服务 Essay 深度修改 金融工程

    Excellent work

  • Yue
    Yue Nov 24, 2018
    硕士文书服务 Personal Statement 深度修改 商业分析

    Thanks a lot to Arden's professional help on my personal statement ！

  • Soul
    Soul Nov 19, 2018
    外籍模拟面试服务 药学

    The STAR method Arden suggests is great for me! And he is quite on time to do the interview. Really to the point and I feel more confident after the interview and know how to practice before my next day' real interview. Thank you, Arden!

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