申请文书为什么重要

美国拥有世界上最发达的高等教育体系,吸引了世界各地诸多留学生,其中有一个颇具权威的排名-USNews大学排名。 《美国新闻和世界报道》(U.S. News and World Report), 简称USNews。USNews对美国的大学的排名开始于1983年,这份排名也是学生选校最重要也是使用最普遍的参考工具。 USNews针对申请中各个院校会参考的学术背景和非学术背景相关因素的重要性都有非常详细的说明。

下表是USNewsTop30院校针对非客观申请参考因素重要性的统计说明。

非常重要
Very Important
重要
Important
会参考
Considered
不参考
Not Considered
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对申请美国本科的学生而言,文书是除标化成绩及平均分之外最重要的申请因素。
申请文书可以体现申请人的个人特质、课外活动情况以及才能,这些是招生官极其关心的,也是标化成绩无法体现的。
根据申请数据统计,中国学生的标化成绩和平均分普遍较高,在申请者中很难拉开差距,因此文书就成了申请制胜的关键。
如果你打算申请美国本科,但是有以下的疑问?
为了帮助你解答这些问题,我们深度研究了Common App、加州申请系统、CAAS申请系统以及美国综合排名前100名院校的200+文书题目,针对各个申请系统的特点进行分析归类,打造了 独属美本申请者的留学文书服务
三大主流美国本科申请系统
Common Application
Common Application, 缩写Common App。该系统算是美国大学申请中最常用的系统之一。 适用于包括哈佛,耶鲁,普林斯顿等名校在诸多美国大学。 该网申系统帮助申请人一次性地完成原本繁琐的申请流程(如提交高中成绩单,推荐信以及essay等)。点击访问官网→
文书要求: 从7个文书话题中选择1个, 字数限制250单词到650单词。
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加州大学申请系统
加州大学申请系统, 简称UC系统, 是美国加州的最具影响力的公立大学系统之一,该系统共包含10个校区。申请时,所有UC校区通过UC系统统一提交申请,共享一个UC申请表格,申请文书共享。但是每个校区的申请是各校区单独审理,每个校区都会给出录取的结果。点击访问官网→
文书要求: 从8个文书话题中选择4个, 每篇不超过350单词。
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CAAS系统
CAAS系统, 全称Coalition for Access, Affordability, and Success, 是哈佛、耶鲁为首的美国90多所公私立大学及文书学院合力开发创建的一个新的大学申请系统。点击访问官网→
文书要求: 从5个文书话题中选择1个, 字数限制500单词到550单词。
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最新文书话题
1. Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this souds like you, then please share your story.
2. The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?
3. Reflect on a time when you questioned or challenged a belief or idea. What prompted your thinking? What was the outcome?
4. Reflect on something that someone has done for you that has made you happy or thankful in a surprising way. How has this gratitude affected or motivated you?
5. Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and new understanding of yourself or others.
6. Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging that is makes you lose all track of time, why does it captivate you? What or who do you turn to when you want to learn more?
7. Share an essay on any topic of your choice. It can be one you’ve written, one that responds to a different prompt, or one of your own design
最新文书话题
1. Describe an example of your leadership experience in which you have positively influenced others, helped resolve disputes or contributed to group efforts over time.
2. Every person has a creative side, and it can be expressed in many ways: problem solving, original and innovative thinking, and artistically, to name a few. Describe how you express your creative side.
3. What would you say is your greatest talent or skill? How have you developed and demonstrated that talent over time?
4. Describe how you have taken advantage of a significant educational opportunity or worked to overcome an educational barrier you have faced.
5. Described the most significant challenge you have faced and the steps you have taken to overcome this challenge. How has this challenge affected your academic achievement?
6. Think about an academic subject that inspires you. Describe how you have furthered this interest inside and/or outside of the classroom.
7. What have you done to make your school or your community a better place?
8. Beyond what has already been shared in your application, what do you believe makes you stand out as a strong candidate for admission to the University of California
最新文书话题
1. Tell a story from your life, describing an experience that either demonstrates your character or helped to shape it.
2. Describe a time when you made a meaningful contribution to others in which the greater good was your focus. Discuss the challenges and rewards of making your contribution
3. Has there been a time when you've had a long-cherished or accepted belief challenged? How did you respond? How did the challenge affect your beliefs?
4. What is the hardest part of a being a teenager now? What's the best part? What advice would you give a younger sibling or friend (assuming they would listen to you)?
5. Submit an essay on a topic of your choice.
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价格明细 Common App: 1260元起 Common App: 1960元起
UC系统: 3570元起 UC系统: 4200元起
CAAS系统: 1085元起 CAAS系统: 1680元起
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